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Karma

As soon as I'd hit you
You'd hit me right back
It'd be like
An instant karma attack

Author notes

I chose the option of Karma being instant and tried to keep it short and punchy

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  • grannyeri gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Liked that last line - instant karma attack. Enjoyed the images this brings to mind. Very creative.


  • daisybee
    October 8, 2008
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    This is short sharp and wicked. The message is just right too- Loved it.


  • daisybee
    October 8, 2008
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    Thanks for entering my contest-comments later


  • FreeTara
    October 8, 2008

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    talk about think little and say big!! this has got me thinking so much and i guess that what the point!!!
    Gongrats and well penned!!!