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A hard days work

One more sip and I'll be fine
Might even move onto mum's wine
I love a good beer after a hard work day
So exhausting, is all of that play

I wiggled about and tickled my nose
Even discovered something called my toes
I did a burp and something that rumbled
I did a little trip and unfortunately tumbled

I went with mum to the big scary mall
There were so many people and really tall
Later she gave me a bath in the tub
Than I asked her to take me to the pub

I love a good beer after a hard work day
I love a good beer, what can I say

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This was originally written for this contest...check out the link to see the pic this goes with

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2422049

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Comments


  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 8, 2008
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    LOl!! Very good job!!


  • asif777
    October 8, 2008
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    Hahaha great flow love it!


  • FreeTara
    October 8, 2008
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    This is a fabulous write for the pic prompt!!
    This did indeed make me laugh well done!!!