In the bowl i place petals of rose
to it i add fresh mistletoe
incense and candle lit on altar
knowing my words shall not falter
moonlight shines shadows fall
passions rise for each and all
fingers fly from head to toe
kisses follow and freely flow
together i say we meet the call
of passions and desires large not small
Author notes
not a spell cast just a write.
A contest entry
- Cast Me Under a Spell by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended November 10, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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magical write...lovely scents and feelings!
Blessed be~
Az
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A good write,this one, although lacking in punctuation..
Although that could just be because I'm practically like the Grammar Nazi..
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A casting spell, a spell cast...a double meeting well written and welcome back!
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Sounds like what I would imagine a real incantation would sound like.
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Well, my sweet, your write surely put a spell on me.
Your words and thoughts are lovely. Beautifully written.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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A wonderful flow of sweet thoughts,,,a very nicely done poem that strikes the heartstrings. So smooth.
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