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Apologies are as bad as lies

And you sat there,
while her head was between your knees..
Did you think that you wouldn't get caught
HA! That was such a stupid though

You lied to us both,
thinking you'd actually get away with it
That was all you were trying to do,
but that didn't work out.

That game was sick and harsh,
not that you cared what would happen
Look at us now,
we won't be together anymore..

I knew it wouldn't last but
I didn't try to stop him.
Either way, it was going to hurt.
And it did, yet, I kinda laughed about it.

You can't apologize to me,
I won't forgive you.
Look where you got yourself
your now writhing in embarrassment.

Of course it hurts,
I trusted you..
But I'm not going to let you win.
Not this time....

Author notes

“Apologies are earned. I give them away. You don’t deserve what I have. You ruined everything. Make sure you know that and maybe next time we’ll see. But right now, no, you can’t apologize. You don’t even deserve to breathe.”

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  • offlimits
    October 15, 2008

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    i thought this was really sad a really goodo poem though you did really well on this particular prompt
    well done
    good luck


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    good take on the prompt
    you used your emotions well, fantastic wrap up at the ending