The way you wear black, it seems so surreal
The absence of color I long to feel
My broken heart, the dark will heal
As if with royalty, I do kneel
Let me be your splash of color
The way you wear black, warms my covers
You don't feel so rough, not like the others
Without the sun, you are my lover
Your hand is coarse against my flesh
I shivers with the night's caress
The way you wear black, a scene so fresh
Tenses my body and arches my chest
My nails in your back, your lips over me
The darkness, it makes me muffle my screams
Love's temptation curls the toes on my feet
The way you wear black, it pleases me
Author notes
*Be yourself, don't take any-ones shit and Never Let Them Take You Alive*
Option 1
A contest entry
- Awake and Unafraid. by alexandra..
1000 points, ended November 30, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Fantastic!
The repetition was a nice touch!
My favorite lines were
"Let me be your splash of color
The way you wear black, warms my covers"
Sweet poem! Chemical Romance is a pretty good band!
Best of luck with this!
peace
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Very, gosh, I can't think of the word,
sensual,glittering,devilish.
All of these are what the stripped version of what I want to say..
goodluck,
x.
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