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My Own Coffin

Along the broken mirrors an image lies, a demon that lives inside of me.She looks like me,she acts like me cause she is me.

Deep behind her warming smile there's a monster and she'll kill us
all. With her lips she'll give the kiss of death. So, guys watch out
she'll brake your heart from the start.

Her warm hands will stab you with a touch;just a touch. when I close my eyes, she talks to me she sees my demise.When I tell her to stop;
she never stops.

With blood thirsty eyes, she drinks my blood. Slowly but surely
shes killing me and her eyes are my coffin.

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  • BlackBloodyRose
    October 7, 2008
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    um.....doesn't reallly fit what i was looking for...but still is very imaginary

    i like it.