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With Changing Leaves

Dreams
Won't let me sleep
Restless
My thoughts creep

Legs
Barely let me stand
Visions
I can't command

Breathing
Seems useless with you
Questions
To help drop a clue

Songs
That remind me
Hands
That need holding

Autumn
Changes everthing
Leaves
Aren't the only thing

Life
It gets kind of hard
Love
I always get scarred


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  • hidingintheshadows9
    October 9, 2008

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    wow sam that was AMAZING. is this one based on that one person you told me about the other day. this was one of your best please keep up the great work i absolutely loved it.

    -nicole-


  • jasminerose
    October 8, 2008

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    EXCELLENT!

    Sam!! Wow I love this piece, you are penning some heartfelt emotions with excellent imagery with deep intense expressions. Beautiful metaphors to boot!
    Nicely done indeed!
    Linda