touching you, feeling you,
your pretty hair I run my fingers through
your sexy smile invites me to play for a while
let me unbutton your blouse while you slip off your skirt
it's time to prove to you that I’m more than a flirt
this is my pleasure, it's all on me
I won't stop until you're all on me
showering my body with your juices of ecstasy
with the expectancy of you calling me your baby
now lay back and let my tongue migrate
over your peaks and valleys to your cave to hibernate
your voice hesitates as my tongue begins to marinate
in your sugar walls I pause and let your floods overtake
my mouth as I savor your taste down south
I love making you moan, scream and shout
I’m sucking you up and drinking you all down
Your potion has my head spinning around
I was supposed to reward you for the things that you do
instead you got me drunk off of your orgasmic brew
you give me that wink because you know I can’t think
then you open your bar and serve me another drink
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Excellent
My Friend there are two ways of reading this piece 1 it could be about a nice cooling pint of golden nectar
2 and the one i went for a really erotic piece,written in such a way as to see what one wants without the crudeness many feel the need to express themselves Excellent Now I'm off to the bar for a nice cool pint of orgasmic brew
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Thank you for your comments my friend. I really appreciate them. Take care.
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Love the metaphor used here my friend. This is sensual without being too over the top. There is a sultry edge to this write. You made me blush a couple of times and believe me, I have seen lots in these years. LOL Excellent! I wish you well in this challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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thank you for your wonderful comments. they mean a lot to me. Much love to you.
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Mmmmmmm!!!! This is so saucy, sexy, sensual!!! Great job Mo!!!
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wow...lol very good
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thank you for your comments. much love to you.
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so that's why..
You ain't been picking up the phone! you been at the 'BAR' all night!! l.o.l. getting drunk!..
u lush you! l.o.l. Good stuff here kid, very steamy!
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Thanks for your comments and support bro! i'm sorry i missed your call but you know how it is at the bar..lol take care.
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It's about time for some erotic words from you!!! How long has it been?! This is great hon
now lay back and let my tongue migrate
over your peaks and valleys to your cave to hibernate
your voice hesitates as my tongue begins to marinate
in your sugar walls I pause and let your floods overtake
my mouth as I savor your taste down south
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thanks. i don't know how long it's been but i'm glad you liked it. take care
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very very stimulating and sexy i was suprise to be reading a adult piece from you its been a while love your flames_jewels_
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thanks for your comments. it has been a while hasn't it? thank you for your flames of support.
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