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Life, or aroundabout

life
it's such a neat word,
leaves you feeling so cuddly
as you await a
blue ribbon for your gold win


life is such fun
such as life is disease-free
and laid out honestly,
as you grab my breast and push me into the bar
(the grinding is more than friendly, and charges may come along)

bust a nut
whether it's in your mind or my underwear,
there is something that is fundamentally wrong,
and I love you
at least for today
as you pass your o positive
up my snatch
and wink to the horizon

so that i may be

be

for us

it drips down the thigh





do you have a better taste?


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  • Darkened Seraph
    October 11, 2008

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    i love this, the imagery in this is brilliant. 'as you grab my breast and push me into the bar' i could really imagine this happening, such wonderful words here a brilliant poem about life.

    Keep writing Seraph


  • csmmoms2
    October 8, 2008
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    Captivating

    It's all aroundabout, twisting and turning...trying to focus on what's real.


  • krystal balllll
    October 8, 2008
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    lmfao! wow this is great!