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~Do Horses Go To Heaven~

Glow Bar Fluci, fondly known as, Miss A
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Oh,the pain of rising this day.
Not a physical one, in anyway.

A once strong and noble steed,
Sleeps undisturbed,... without heed.

Many years before, during her reign,
She performed at the top of her game.

Aboard was a child, eight years old,
With every confidence then to mold.

Years slowly passed, the little girl grew,
The mare taught the child, everything she knew.

Many ribbons and trophies, then collected,
Time was better, than ever expected.

The girl became a woman, brave and bold,
The mare grew tired, weary and old.

Away from home the mare did reside,
Just for a short time, to you I confide.

Returning was a horse not to recognize,
Her appearance of undue compromise.

Time took it's toll, health now fleeting,
Days forever gone of champion competing.

Alas, In sorrow she is no more,
My heart grieves the mare, for-evermore.

My child she took under fledgling wing,
A gentle companion through everything.

Never did I worry, nor fear for safety's sake,
Never did I second guess making a mistake.

My eyes burn, in hot flooding tears,
My woman child broken hearted, it appears.

Where do horses go when they leave this earth?
Does God reward those, that are more than their worth?

Do horses go to Heaven?
Please tell me it's so.


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Author notes

My daughter's horse of many years, we had to have put down.
It was with out a doubt, one of the hardest things I have
ever done. grandniem

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  • Painted Nails
    October 18, 2008

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    Awww, this is beautiful! It is very sad and emotional. I personally adore horses and I can feel your daughter's pain. Horses and all other animals deserve to go to heaven just like the rest of us do! Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Sydney


  • Sunshine Always
    October 16, 2008

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    Horses live on in our hearts . Once they have touched your life you can never forget them. My heart shares your sadness for I lost my boy last year...They're only a whisper away...mal...

  • cindyloo
    October 15, 2008

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    what a beautiful tribute to your amazing equine friend. Horses are the most beautiful creatures on earth. You have captured the painful emotions of losing four-legged friend. I have three horses and have not yet had to make that dreaded decision. I did have to put my beloved Daisy dog down a year ago. It was the hardest decision you have had to make but the kindest and most humane act of love you could do for her. I say YES they do go to heaven. Just look to the sky on a cloudy day and you will see her running painless and free.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is such a lovely piece. Every person who has loved a pet, large or small, with connect with this. A wonderful tribute to Miss A for all the years of devoted service. May she kick up her heels in warm sunshine and roll in soft dewy grass for all time.


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    this just made me cry, the pain is so raw throughout this write, it is a wonderful write and i'm sure that she really will be in heaven, young once again to run though green meadows, quietly waiting to be reunited with yourselves once again. a truly great piece,


  • Symphony
    October 8, 2008

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    beautiful

    as a fellow animal person, i can wholly understand the pain you guys went thruogh in letting the mare go, and i wholly believe taht animals really do go to Rainbow Bridge to live out the rest of their days...

    You told her tale so gently, making me [and others?] admire this horse for the blessing she gave your daughter, and all the good times.... may your hearts begin healing soon, and memories never forget her


  • Mareann52
    October 7, 2008

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    ***** stars to you!

    As A Horse owner and lover I could feel your pain, love and sorrow. But memories we hold so dear to our hearts. Since God created man and animals as well as everything else, theres no way he'd exclude them from heaven. Their beauty is in ther souls too.
    have a wonderful day, Mareann
    ps, please continue to write with so much passion.

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