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Abracadabra

Abracadabra, write me a rhyme.
Stir me a potion with lemon and lime.
Throw in some booze to make me all tipsy,
Enchanting my toes so they go quite nippy.

Make me lightheaded just for that night,
Create me a costume, all frothy and light.
Wiggle that wand from side to side.
Conjure me magic at Hallowe'en tide.

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  • Rachel Kruger
    November 2, 2008

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    Fun to read!

    Good take on the prompt. Bouncy little poem, with good rhythm and rhyme.

    Good luck with the contest.

  • Bad Bill
    October 11, 2008
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    A delightful little poem, light-hearted and full of bounce. Very enjoyable!

    Bill