It arrives almost unnoticed
embracing everything,
catching last remains of light
and pushing down the sun,
It falls slowly turning dark the sky
patching it with bright eyes,
that behold all around and down
like heavenly guardians staring from above
Nightfall, blackened sky
Nightfall, darkened illusion
Nightfall, I will make you mine
caught in this seclution
Demons cries fill the night;
ravens hold the black curtain
guiding stars in their unknown path
of hollow night disorder
Chaotic spheres spining up there
when the sun just went away
shining moon, revealing madness
of blackened hearts filled with sadness
Unnoticed shadows awake at a time
projecting their shapes over
heads even mine.
Starving of sins look for their preys
to torment forever till the end
of their days.
A contest entry
- This is Halloween! by thorlorn thanatos.
400 points, ended November 23, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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You did a nice job setting up the imagery of this piece. I can easily set myself in here for some halloween chills. Great job.
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this is realy good i enjoyed reading this you have exlint diction adn seam to wright relay well it flows great. i liek how haunting to words that you used it sounded almost emo and i love emo poetry
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Enjoyed the poem. The imagery and flow were both good.
Grizzled
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