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Just a Toy

A pair of dark eyes
Follows me down
Watches me critically
As I begin to drown
But through the darkness
There is a light
And through the darkness
I begin to fight
The apathy, trying to pull me in
For a few moments,
The darkness seems to win
But a clear voice
Cuts through all the rest
Telling me I have a choice
To be better, to be best
To lie awake and unafraid
Next to a body of a boy
To stand up and walk away
And stop being just a toy

Author notes

Be yourself, don't take any-ones shit and Never Let Them Take You Alive

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  • alexandra.
    November 22, 2008
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    I like this,
    but I love the end part best.

    It's good.


    goodluck,
    x.


  • Jaffa-
    October 10, 2008

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    Wow this was totally amazing.
    I absolutly LOVED it.
    It's really explanetory.
    Well done. Amazing write.


  • PrettyxoxPoison
    October 7, 2008
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    I love it Desi
    I love you too