A pair of dark eyes
Follows me down
Watches me critically
As I begin to drown
But through the darkness
There is a light
And through the darkness
I begin to fight
The apathy, trying to pull me in
For a few moments,
The darkness seems to win
But a clear voice
Cuts through all the rest
Telling me I have a choice
To be better, to be best
To lie awake and unafraid
Next to a body of a boy
To stand up and walk away
And stop being just a toy
Author notes
Be yourself, don't take any-ones shit and Never Let Them Take You Alive
A contest entry
- Awake and Unafraid. by alexandra..
1000 points, ended November 30, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this,
but I love the end part best.
It's good.
goodluck,
x.
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Wow this was totally amazing.
I absolutly LOVED it.
It's really explanetory.
Well done. Amazing write. -
I love it Desi
I love you too





