Mirror, mirror on the wall
Whose the scariest one of all
Why did he leave me on that day?
Was I just not pretty?
Shiny, silver coating world
Another side of me
Reflecting in my bright eyes
You are that part of me
Beside the ugly face and beady eyes
I feel the hate bottled up inside
What once used to appear as the girl that was his
Now only shines as a girl full of hopelessness
Falling down into the depths of nowhere
Are you and all the other memories
The moments we left there, buried
Along with who I used to be
Another side reflects in the light
But it doesn't look like me
A contest entry
- Reflections-What Do You See? by BlackBloodyRose.
450 points, ended October 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i absolutly love the last 2 lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is so good!
you are a very good writer
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