emotion for insect that lets me tell my activity
and to the verity everyone's (a) template for contemplation
in this frequency or fragility of nature made
dual, one cute, walk to sunny leaf
grasshopper's steady on my shadow ~
oh no initial uterus grade --
your jump won't be miscarriage
just foliating concentration fickle/real world…
shake smocked skirt endangered resonance
similar to suddenly knowing pregnancy
grasshopper, my palm feels your six points of weight
like fingers sense pressed against each other in isometrics :
I had muscle introduction of carrying you
logical interval
a grasshopper has hue of plants
that use chromatic chemicals
against freeze alternative to jacket,
do I need to defense mechanism against miscarriage ~
force environment one antenna checkmark
just out in sunshine
after shower and my hair's wet weight
felt like a grasshopper jump when I turned my head
and I can cryingly feel expulsion all over again
a rock it steps on is color in my closed eyes
smooth as slipping among blankets ripening open dream stability
Author notes
if I plant a garden will it be real
as jumping grasshoppers and blooming flowers,
total baby bump past soil of miscarriage
prenatals or pesticide and three year organic nudge
A contest entry
- In my life... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 14, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
Comments
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Well you took me into the depth of your immages and the words also its impact which is almost an intriguing one..Indeed you impressed me with your experimental poetry..well done..and thanks for your entry..
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PrabhuDayal Khatter thanks for attaching that thought
I suppose some it may seem better bracketed in on itself yet, if that fits 'experimental' gifts... though swooning between tight and toggled for a correlative impression. thank you for accepting what was sincere from first stanza with stream of increasable meaning.
I know I need to be reasonable with ache always in system, may I ask about something else still and recall be useful ~
call me Carolyn
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