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Just Musing Around!

A distant sound upon my ear
stirs creatures wings
with eyes of tears

They drip inside my
head with stains,
that bleed like whispers
in the rain

Echoes weep in hollow walls
they jest and mock then
backwards crawl

Tales of unspoken shame
dream nightmares that
expose their blame

The citidel of sweet refrain
serenade the locus with
lips of brains

You my friend would cocka doo
if you had hair that
chickens grew

and beaks like locks of golden fire,
that drooled upon your deepest desire






 

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  • Poetess12
    October 10, 2008

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    I like how well you rhymed your poem and of course it doesn't make sense. Great job!

    Thank you for your entry.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    wow

    Amazing fantasy piece my friend! Beautiful flow and rhyme, and great imagery! Two thumbs, waaay up!!