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Running (in) the Madhouse

Hiding in the attic,
Clinging to the ceiling,
Arrows from the flowerbed
flew into my window
poisoning me: the intruder.

But I will find the heart of these walls,
to understand the sorrow
in the eyes' windowpane.

In the labyrinth of these halls
I find the horrifying answer.
I descend, taking hope with me
with the hopes that there's an after

after this.

I find myself in the middle of this vast nowhere,
trapped within the corridors.
I'm dreaming of a world imagined
anywhere but here...

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow... very abstract and sad (i like it!)
    I could really feel the.. insanity in this piece. Your word choice is flawless too.
    Thanks for the entry