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Almost Over

Build me up only to make me come crashing down again
I'm playing a game...
I think I can win
Caught in the middle of the ocean.. and the tides not going my way.
There's no where to turn , so I guess I'll have to stay


..No way out
No where to run.
I need to be rescued.., but my battle has just begun
My life's falling apart

I'm slowly falling , my life is far from grand
I'm sinking slowly; slowly sinking into this quick sand
No one to rescue me; no one as far as I can see
No need to try and swim, because I can't move my feet

Cluttered in an isolated room filled with mess
My mind begins to fill with stress

Broken in a million little pieces;
That's the condition my heart is in
... Everyday is torture, never knowing if this could be the end
The most important thing is being pulled away from my reach
And the fact that there's nothing I can do... really gets to me

Test and trials
Many I've had, but I never knew heartache could hurt this bad

Im falling
Off of a cliff
Off of a mountain , off of a ledge
I'm now free falling,
I've already been pushed too close to the edge

Quickly, but vividly my life flashes before my eyes
My time is running out; I have no time left for goodbyes

Rock bottom now seems more real than ever
...this could be the last straw.. My life as I once knew it, could be over ....


forever

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  • MysteriousStrangerX
    November 18, 2008

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    wow...good job

    strong emotion

    TERRIFIC use of imagery i.e. "Caught in the middle of the ocean.. and the tides not going my way." i thought that was great

    good write


  • Super-man
    October 15, 2008
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    Beautiful

    The one good thing about rock bottom, is you can only go up.


    • Pianokidd
      October 15, 2008
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      yeah..i guess ur right about that...not seeming that way right now tho...


  • HopelessPoet1087
    October 7, 2008
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    wow... so deep of emotions... its an amazing write.

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