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Childhood and Me

Mommy, Mommy I still call her
Can I have that cereal?

No is all she says

well can I have that candy?

No

Well what about a hug?

Ok fine a hug

and a kiss too?

Alright

Cool is all I say

Well can I have that peice of

Nice try

Drats Foiled Again I Love You mommy

 

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"The Child Inside- Qkumbah Zoo"

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  • zatog
    November 4
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    hahahaha, that brings back child memories. good job.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    December 5, 2008

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    aaaw

    this is so cute and lovely. it brought back childhood memories from the past adorable. loved the write. keep penning


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    This is sweet

    Oh the kids are truly smart you have to be on your toes all the time


  • Sir Squigglim
    October 7, 2008
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    OMG THATS SO CUTE (yea, sorry I just called your poem cute... but I liked it...)


  • None But Nim
    October 7, 2008
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    This is so cute! I never had much of a relationship with my Mother, but this poem is so adorable! Im glad you shared this poem with me.

    Again, though, please go back and read the rules. You forgot something. I'll DQ this if you don't add it, and it would be a shame, because this is an amazing poem.

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