Risen dead,
the pheonix from the ashes,
the trinket no one cared to fix was mended,
the beauty found in the beast,
the long-forgotten, withered gardens tended.
A forgotten thing,
lost and beautifully flawed,
may be remembered,
but the scars of the past
shall mark it forever.
the pheonix from the ashes,
the trinket no one cared to fix was mended,
the beauty found in the beast,
the long-forgotten, withered gardens tended.
A forgotten thing,
lost and beautifully flawed,
may be remembered,
but the scars of the past
shall mark it forever.
Author notes
I'm not really sure what this is. (Again, I write according to how I feel.) I remember reading somewhere, though, that flawed things are the most beautiful, for the flaws bring out its true beauty. Then I thought about how flawed things are usually forgotten because they're "broken", but someone can happen upon them and fix them. It goes for people, too, in a mental sense, I guess. Eh, I really don't know. Interpret it how you may. Comment about it. I'm interested to see what you think.
Critique?
Comments
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Kelly, It's really pretty. I like it. And it ryhmes. All of the time.

