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Reflections?

I used to look in the mirror
Ok with what I'd see
Now I look in and see my eyes
Is that really me?

I'm bigger now, no I'm not fat
But I'm no longer trim
I guess when he left
My beauty left with him

I know this is revolting
But my hair is a greasy mess
And the saddest part
Right now I couldn't care less

I stopped smiling every minute
A frown is etched in my face
And when I hang around old friends
I feel so out of place

It seems I always eat so much now
Even though I don't
And I somtimes think I'll always cry
But I know I won't

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  • Dygurl
    October 10, 2008
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    very sad write you have a typo in the second to the last stanza. stand strong. you will make it.


  • KittyAnne
    October 10, 2008

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    amazing

    Wow... that Really captures what I've been thinking lately... awesome job... fyi I think you ment hang not hand... <3