Sitting thinking of Gerard Way till the early hours of the next day.
A love that's so demanding.
I get so weak.
From the constant craving of those luscious lips.
I don't love you.
I know it's lust.
But when you finely come around.
And i get what i want.
Maybe i'll be off to find another way.
Mikey's simply gorgeous.
Lovely for us all.
This love has ripped up my head.
My aspirations to shreds.
So i put on a violent pose and scream to the songs that he plays.
Staring at ray,
Bopping my head
to the awesome guitar that he plays.
licking my lips
and thinking of hips crashing and bumping in mine.
Bob is so gorgeous
sexy it's true
cuddly like Mr. ted
love to be right there next to him
especially in his bed.
Finally little Frankie,
that sexy silly tease,
I adore him so very much,
he's never gonna see me,
like a bullet through a flock of doves.
That's why i stay on the other side of the crowd.
Just bobbing my head to the sound that saved my life.
The five men that i love none the wiser of how they've changed my life for the better.
Author notes
*Be yourself, don't take any-ones shit and Never Let Them Take You Alive*
A contest entry
- Awake and Unafraid. by alexandra..
1000 points, ended November 30, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow.
Technically, this is exceeeeeeeellllentttttttt
I like it lots&lots&lots&lots.
I really love how you've changed the lyrics around, especially how if you didn't know about mcr, then you wouldn't be able to tell where your words stop and their lyrics start.
My only suggestion is to build on Bob's stanza. I don't know if it's because I've not gone through the lyrics in some time that I can't see any in there, or just because the lyric/s are very toned down, or have you even put any in?
I'm not making much sense, but you get my drift, right?
Oh, and build on Frankie's, but that's 'cause I love him to pieces, and want to read more. Not cause it actually needs it
goodluck.
x.
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BRILLIANT bbe
my chemical romance rock
love it
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Amen!!!!!!
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