Red lipstick on white paper, I write your name
Your full, gentle lips are what I claim.
Your sweet love is what I conjure and crave;
From this valley of loneliness it is me you will save.
Rose petals in a pot of boiling brew;
Representing my yearning that overflows for you.
Clouds of billowing steam collect by the hour
Reminiscent of the fogged glass of our two-party shower.
Your name I chant three times and there is a knock at my door
You burst in like a mad man, covering my mouth with yours..
A contest entry
- Cast Me Under a Spell by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended November 10, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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*looks down at galaxy's comment*.... wow!!
Anyway, great write, and I enjoyed the last few lines too!!
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'Your name I chant three times and there is a knock at my door'
Wow...
Lustful things in store....
I'm almost wet....
Wet kisses on your lips...'both sets'...lol
Galaxy2
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Rose petals in a pot of boiling brew;
hmmm
if this magic potion works...I want to use it to someone
how long does the spell lasts?
hmm on mad man
I have a scheming smile on my face after reading this.
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LOL!!!! It works as long as you want it too!! Viagra helps too!!! LOLOL!!!
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lol on Viagra...I used to work where I am selling a male enhancement supplement...thru phone, and then a male caller asked me, seriously, Does size matter...I answered, probably lied, I said yes so I could just persuade him to buy the product. he hang up laughing...probably wasn't convinced.
God I even sell Viagra thru phone...funny but it is a best seller...
Weird job...this is more of the telemarketer type only they are the ones calling.
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LOL!!! Wow!! So it was YOU who called me?? LOL!!
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aha oh well, actually lol you got me...rose petals and pot of boiling brew...do you accept COD...j/k...Thanks for the smile
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You did a heated job on this! Great job hon
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Thanks hon!!
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Wow!!!!!!!! I can totally imagine this =O. Your good. <333
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Thank u sweetie!!
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WOW
Yesss! Now that's what I'm talking about.
This was mad sweet passionate and romantic.
I love your style. This was a really good piece.
The images were provocative and sensually delightful.
I love how you ended it too. Sounds like something
I would do. Bravo baby. Bravo!
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Thank u so much!!!
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My what vivid detail! Puts the reader right there as if looking through the window at the scene! GREAT write sisi!
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Thanks!!!
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DAMN!!
THAT'S HOTT!! wow, i can see the scne in my mind so vividly! outstanding work poetess!
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Thank you Swan!!!
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