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My Life Of Sin

This is my life of sin.
Because in this life i can never win.
No matter how hard i try.
No matter how hard i cry.
No matter how much i lie, or try to deny.
I can never hide the evil inside.
Dont try to heel me.
I just want you to feel me.
This is my life of sin and inside it kills me.

poetry is my life plz comment!

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  • bunchnbunch
    October 7, 2008

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    bunchnbunch

    if you really mean this then you are so right.
    we all have sinned. i totally belive you im knew to and try to check out some of my poetry.