rain falls,
rolls down my face
hits the earth
with impact unreal
The pain gushing
into the earth,
makes me wonder
where it's been...
hard enough
to let it end
but with no control
it's hard to stay alive
the rain drop,
now long gone
leaves an impression
in my soul that stays
What feelings do you capture from this peice?
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Nice Write
I like the clever mehtaphorical useage through out your poem here. any ways ina w ay to me this poem represents heartache or heart break where the rain would be your blood drops driopping after someone were to cut themselves to alleviate the pain. then again I also felt like the rain would represent ones dark memories and well you're letting it all go in an attempt to move on in life. either way this is a very depe fascinating write. keep up the good work
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