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Broken Heart

my disease is fatal
something i can't fix
a side effect of
your antics and tricks

i'm slowly dying
fading more everyday
losing little by little
my will to stay

band aids can't fix this
not stiches or gauze
saving my heart
is a lost cause

you can't see it happening
it's on the inside
my terminal illness
is something i hide

i'm slipping away
not trying to hold on
you'd be much happier
if i was gone

just wait a while longer
and you will see
how a broken heart
killed me

boys are mean :[

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  • Painwarlock
    October 9, 2008

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    wow its good to see inside of a persons emotions and i mean this is a fine example of what peotry is all about expression i have had many experiences myself where my heart was broken and thats been alot of times


  • XxjustinsgirlxX
    October 8, 2008
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    I agree

    guys are mean!!!