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Fort res(t)


Beautiful in shape but broken inside
Side splitting from packed things
Things from others that she had no business carrying
Carrying it all for them, but who for her...HER?

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Such a sad poem. Well written. The use of the emphasized question at the end is very effective! Great job! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!