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Would you let me go?
Would you make my heart die slow?
You hold my heart in your hand.
You have the power to make me sit or stand.
But know is the time to swim or sink
There’s just no more time to sit and think
Just let me go or hold me close
You have the power to take or lose
This is the way it has to be
It’s all of me, or none of me you’ll see
I know I love you this is all I can say
How can you make me feel this way?
But is it time to move on?
Is this love we had really gone?
Now were down to the truth.
This can go bumpy or it can go smooth
Really this is up too you
This is who I’m doing this to
But now it’s time to simply choose
You know you don’t always have to loose
I just really want to know where we stand
Please tell me make this madness end!

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  • queen gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi blackrainbow

    I have walked in these shoes before i can feel your pain this is a good poem. The font color is a little hard for me to see but its all good please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • MelissaLynn
    October 7, 2008
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    awww i really like this poem. ur my new friend. lol