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the Firefly Dance

Here we sit
snuggled so close
openly admiring the campfire.

Above us, in the clear
crisp night sky, we notice
that the fire flies are dancing.
They so look like miniature stars
that are so dazzled by your
infinitesimal allure.

I so understand where they
are coming from for I too
am so dazzled by all that you are.

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  • Harlequin Dance
    October 24, 2008
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    Awww...that last line is so cute! The poem has a great flow and imagery


  • Harlequin Dance
    October 7, 2008
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    "The fireflies dance like stars, dazzled by your infinitesimal allure."

    Take it where you will.