No walls surrounding our bodies,
or roof to keep us safe and dry;
Just the ground beneath our feet,
and the stars above our heads.
No street lights to light our way,
or music to keep us on groove;
Just the glow of the moon,
and rhythm of our heart beats.
Fingers intertwined filling spaces,
and hands laid upon moving hips;
You're skin so gently touching mine,
transferring your heat to my body;
And I can feel your breath on my neck.
Your heart beat is colliding with mine,
and I can feel it pounding on my chest.
Our feet have no intention to ever stop,
and our minds intend to dance forever;
Its just you and me here together,
with the stars scattered in the sky,
and a shimmer of light from the moon.
Everything's so perfect and silent,
but the whisper of your I love you in my ear.
Author notes
Not sure if I like this..
Prompt: "'Neath frost-rimmed moonlight I danced with her, the beat of unheard music ripe in my mind."
A contest entry
- Title/Quote Prompt by Harlequin Dance.
600 points, ended October 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You might not be sure if you like it, but I think it's well-written and it makes me smile. It makes me feel happier just by reading it
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Aw, thanks.
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well i think this is amazing, i really love it, and the ending, is superb
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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Thanks. <3
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this is amazing
this is AWESOME it put a picture in my mindd ... i loved it ! awesome job !
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Thanks.
The prompt was kind of hard for me so I don't know if I like it. =/
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"'Neath frost-rimmed moonlight I danced with him, the beat of unheard music ripe in my mind."
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Do you care if I change him to her?
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Go ahead!
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Thanks. I'll try to have something by tonight.
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