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Creatures of The Night

We attack!
We destroy!
We kill!

We attack you
In the cover of night
We come from behind
Forever out of sight

We drink!
We splurge!
We rip you apart!

Greedy we are
For the best part
Screw the legs and arms
We want your fucking heart

You’re dead!
We’re full!
Shit, light!

We’re fucked
If we stay
For here it comes
The light of day!

It burns!
We’re done!
Only dust now!

Eye for an eye
Tooth for a tooth
I guess
He spoke the truth

Author notes

vampires!! hahaha! i just had to put that verse at the end of it. it just sounded so right.

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 11, 2008
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    Excellent write, a very angry piece here. Thanks for entering.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 11, 2008
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    A good write indeed. Loved the imagery in this.
    Thanks for your entry and good luck
    Gaylene