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Summer Kiss

Missing image
fruit
of your offering:

sweet words caressing
soft skin;
charms of colorful
recollection ...

summer
of innocence.


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  • parenchma
    October 20, 2008
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    I read a poem sunday

    Nothing
    is as intimate
    As a kiss
    exept a poem


  • PerVirtuous
    October 14, 2008
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    A well deserved gold for thesebeautiful and thoughtful words.


  • ZachP silver member
    October 12, 2008
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    a beautiful taste of summer romances past.
    Well done, dear poet.
    Good luck!


    • myrataal silver member
      October 12, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the Gold ...

      and glitter in your contest. It was such a fun contest. I enjoyed penning something positive and happy.
      Love
      Myra


  • CaliOkie silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    What a wonderful response to the prompt. I can taste your words -- guess what they taste like?

    So warm and nostalgic. Like late afternoon sunlight filtered by the atmosphere, or memories grow warmer when filtered through the atmosphere of time.

    Wonderful poetry my friend. Long or short form, you always craft excellence.

    Garrison


  • rite
    October 8, 2008
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    The deepest wishes of hearts showering in Light are beautiful beyond words. Ack.


  • stompsalot
    October 8, 2008

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    beautiful! love the pic! the words are tender sweet. you have an amazing talent and this gem with so few words. "charms of colorful recollection" <--- creates powerful images for me! love it!
    blessings *stomps


  • MargaretG
    October 7, 2008

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    Before I saw the picture I thought, sweet as peaches, but maybe no, sweet as jellies! This is a delightful poem, best of luck!

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