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Missing

A flood of tears kept away
Is all that I got done today
No more why’s or wond’ring how
Ignoring the life of upside down
Holding in my letting go
Out of sight what no one needs to know
Tears for tomorrow less for today
Trying to live without a way
The pain that I’d bring of the pain that I hide
Avoiding the reasons of why to keep it inside

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  • Emotional-wreck
    April 22

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    That was deep.I liked the beggining alot actually. and the ending was cool.
    "The pain that I’d bring of the pain that I hide
    Avoiding the reasons of why to keep it inside"

    Those words are so relatable.I've felt like this alot..The title fit perfect too.

  • Topnotchsy
    April 7
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    Nice write. Deals with emotions, and puts them down on paper well.


    • flaed
      April 7

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      thank you so much. i have yet to have any one comment on this poem, as you can see, but even my freinds whom i've shown it to i think are too afraid to say anything. too scared to hurt me?