Nestled beneath faintly worn fleece
enwrapping reflections of balmy eastern sands,
ironed to sun-baked polycrystalline-
thatched plateaus of heightened pleasure
hum alongside quivering membranes
evoking,
ravenous mouths
Devotion tantalizing unity
of intimate partners ~
Inciting a natural affinity
Author notes
TITLE/PROMPT 5. ELEPHANTS MAY NOT FORGET BUT (Finish the sentence)
... neither do I
an acrostic
A contest entry
- Title Prompts! by JustSimplyLissa.
600 points, ended November 14, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very nicely done! The tranquility yet stormy emotions raging through this is titillating. Very nice play on words!
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thank you because picking a direction for the given prompt was definitely challenging.
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Totally unexpected direction. Memories...beautiful! Geo
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thanks
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I see you haven't started this one yet... allow me to give you a few leads... "but...
they sure stink"
they sure can gore you to death"
they know an obnoxious nature photographer when they see one"
it doesn't matter, they'll ram your Land Rover anyway..."
they still make funny faces when they see you again"
"they have the largest body-to-tail ratio of any animal I know" -
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Better than anything she can come up with for sure
I lucked out. I got harlequin heartache. 
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Yeah my title prompt is about as long as the mammal itself...sheesh
I had yet to decide which direction to really take this one... although your direction is very amusing
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lol, sorry for the long title, it is just a collection of titles from our Titles Are Us group. We do about 5 a week and some get used and some don't.
and I think you can understand why now. lol
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ha, yes my first thought was that of heffalumps and woozles
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