I hate you with the fury of engulfing flames
Rising higher and tickling my stomach with pain
Bubbling my heart into a raging boil
Tattooing my insides with a bloody stain
Destroying my entire self into spoil
My blood pumping through my veins
Hot as a red coal on the grill
Yet, I love you still
How could I possibly love you this much?
A love that washes my stomach with rain
And leaves my heart struggling in turmoil
That heals the tattoo to a scar of strain
That makes my insides curl into a coil
My blood rushing to my brain
You break me with this kiss
You kill me with this touch
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I hate how I love you
Author notes
Jessica Blader/17 years old
A contest entry
- Lots of options and fun by trekkergirl.
600 points, ended October 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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wow i simply love this ... ... i may add per writes if i dont get enough ... ... keep a look out and if i do u should add this one
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Man I am loving this poem! The title is absolutely perfect! I liked the last line, it really finished it all off nicely.
I think that you did a great job with this one! Keep up the great work! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Take care
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please put prompt in your AN so I can comment on this poem thanks
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This poem is badass
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