Breaking patterns of checkerboards,
he is the bishop, I am the queen.
Saving myself for checkmate.
~ Your move ~
A contest entry
- ~Give me your BEST Prewrites~ by Bean Sidhe.
1000 points, ended November 14, 2008, 46 entries
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If I knew anything about chess (I think that's what this is about) I would probably really like this poem. I think it's good, but I can't say because I've never played and don't even know the rules.
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Short, simple and to the point. I enjoyed the changes in font to direct your reader's eyes and the subject matter was intriguing. Nicely done! Thank you for your entry & good luck!
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i love this it leaves the meanign to the reader and thats y i liek ur poetry you are adn artist with your words and that is so hard to be great work
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this poem is deep and simple all rolled into one, you do so well with it, as always keep writing, ~Amy
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Ha! I getz it. lol. Nice write, and as IrishGypsyRose said, I enjoyed how you wrote so metaphorically.
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Unique
I love how the metaphor was played here...a very nice piece indeed. I enjoyed reading it immensely. Yours in poetry,
gypsy
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this is soooo good. I really like it alot
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