Corners collect
with rummaged ruins
salvaging times
hard forgotten
too close to the heart
beats smoldering burns
with walls emerging
sky scraped in forgiveness
now spiraling smoke
scatters dust over curves
that once laid sweet
in satin
so regrets bellow
to heaven’s high
beckoning fingers to curl
as frayed convenience
is disposed
from new contentment
these rose colored stains
smudge heavy;
smearing my window’s pane,
making it hard to see a sunrise
when loves colored
with deception~
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Again.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended October 14, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amen!!! Very well spoken piece of pain and heartbreak penned within these lines. The deception that feeds upon each remnant of heart, mind, and soul ... Something that I can more than just feel ... Great write! Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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Thank you for the very insightful compliment Sis and as always the beautiful words you always leave on my poetry!! Thank you also for the lovely award on my entry
Jazzy
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Wow, such deep feelings within the heart of deception. It can hurt, when deception rears its ugly head. Enjoyable read.
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sighs bathed in tears...love the play of pane/painnow
"spiraling smoke
scatters dust over curves
that once laid sweet
in satin"
Best romatic poet on the site!!
yup, yup, that's you
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Again, another write beautifully crafted, yet with such a sad story behind it... heartache / heartbreak can be so devastating... wonderful work
Wow, im in this contest too, so will have to settle on trying for the silver 
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Wonderful Commment
Such beautiful words surrounded by sadness. This was so heartfelt my friend. Always a pleasure to read your poems. Stunnning imagery!!!!!! Sending you sunshine and smiles. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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