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back tracked thoughts only detract
from the silence of the glittering moment
for when one chooses not to look into the eyes
that is when the unsaid words begin to become burdens
as the tensions build within
till all the world must be wanting with me
that which i offer can not be procured from any other means of attachment
together there is a unity
which binds the whole
making it greater than the sum of its parts
and thats the secret to life
not to see it as the chart of values
but the highs and lows of a charted wonderment
infinity is no bounds, for the cause of our peace

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aim creation, direct rip off from
since feeling is first by
e.e. cummings

you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....

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