God's artistry so stunning brings soft smiles
Humbled by the gracefulness I see here
I sit in thanks, inhaling seasons' guile
With each new dawn vast wonders do appear.
In warmth of summer sun I feel His love
Warm breezes that so softly touch my soul
Sweet freedom of the wings that fly above
This aura sits and my heart is consoled.
Bright russets, golds and reds, a changing scene
In heralding the pristine Winter cloak
Each season you can see Lord's hand serene
And finally the gift of Spring's bright strokes.
For His design is one so unsurpassed
Until He comes again renewal lasts.
Author notes
Prompt - Catch a Smile
In a list
A contest entry
- Catch a Smile by Samplette.
1500 points, ended October 15, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
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Outstanding
I thought this was an excellent sonnet. I liked the way you linked the spiritual theme with the beauty of nature. I thought this worked very well. A poem that gives something back with some very pretty images.
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nicely written. good take on prompt
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Very nicely penned, so gentle and soft like a spring's breeze. Beautiful!
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Beautifully penned. Soft and inviting. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for entering the contest. Very nice.
Sam
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As I read I gaze out my window to see Gods beaiuful autumn day arising. I think He is very proud of you dear poet.
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Thank you for your beautiful comment Bob
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