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catching blue skies.




amidst attempts at a smile
and lazy gossip over my head

blue skies wink at me
from your window

inviting me for a vacation-
a december with wishes come true.


words sprawl inside me
drawling monotones from my muse

but whenever i close my eyes
with you in my mind

i can almost drown in sunlight
and catch a piece of our blue skies.


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  • transit
    October 7, 2008

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    ooo

    such a romantic and sweet piece. The imagery was perfect and I could almsot imagine.

    The feel is happy throughout and such a beautiful thing I wish it does come true for you. I think I know what you are talking about but I am not too sure but great poem. love the feelings

    tranist~