I kicked the leaves aside
as I walked down memory lane
beneath my huge umbrella
sipping sweet champagne.
All the colours were so bright
in my rainbow overhead
as I lay within my dreams
on that softest featherbed.
With my sweet champagne
I ate some oysters too
hoping that the waiter
would not misconstrue!
The feathers from my bed
floated round me like a cloud
I danced within their sway
though they were not very loud.
The waiter smiled at me
as I walked down memory lane
I ask you, do you think
from champagne I should abstain?
Author notes
Option #1 Be creative with your words and write a poem
that rhymes and doesn't make much sense.
A contest entry
- The Art Of Words by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended October 14, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
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I loved this
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Thank you for your entry.
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Cute poem. I like the rhyme. You did a great job.
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I raise my 
to this one and maybe a couple of 
s 
Best of luck with this one...VERY FUNNY 
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well I agree that if these thoughts came from drinking the champaign then perhaps you should abstain.
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NO! NO! NO!
Never stop drinking Champagne...it's so nice and the bubbles do the most amazing things to you
I loved your poem; it made me feel light and airy just like drinking a glass or two of the bubbly stuff would do.
Best wishes in the contest
Love Margaret
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this one's cute..i thought its nice..(",)
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this one's cute..i thought its nice..(",)
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