The joy of love
Is like into a melody
A universal union-
Of two souls feeling the glory
Of the finest brand of joy
With love balanced on
The body's
Trembling knees...
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A contest entry
- The joy of love.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended October 9, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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yes indeed, the finest joy has a universal quality and balance and dance harmony!
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I love birds and now that the children are grown and gone, I am going to purchase a bird that can love me unconditioanlly. Even if I am not always the same as the bird is, when it comes to these emotions, I'll give it my greater try.
I love birds and your poem. Much Love and good luck in the contest.
Renee
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You did great with this Jalalbad! Nicely written and just a joy to read! THANKS!!!
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Ah..indeed a music of the love is playing the notations of the universal tone..thanks for such a wonderful piece in my contest my friend..well done..
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The saved saving the safe. Lolly's ability to love is probably a talent many a human could learn a thing or two from. Even if she's being naughty
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good morning Jally
I dropped in to tell you I liked your new poem
that must be your birdie buddy
gorgeous and likely brings you much Joy
hugs Moony
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Magnifico, just beautiful I can relate to this write of yours dear poetess
How genious you can be with your pen
Love
Nick
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