listen to the sound
its soft quiet tumbling
crackling leaves drop
A contest entry
- Seasonal " Haiku's" by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended October 16, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes!!!!! a good haiku form the word go
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Lovely autumn haiku dear Scarlett....Another gem in your treasury of poems!
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Autumn to me holds two different pictures. On one hand it's the end of the summer and it's getting colder. On the other, it's got its own smells and sounds, and it's simply beautiful as the trees change colors. Thanks for capturing the brighter side of autumn. Nice write.
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Wonderful
Thanks for the trip through the Autumn woods. I can even smell Autumn with sound effects. Great job, Honey.
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excellent!
Your words tell of a very special sound, that only occurs in the Fall of the year. I love that sound.
Great work, and good luck in this contest!
Jeannette
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Splendid
I love the way you depicted the changing of seasons so well. I could almost hear and feel the crunch of fallen leaves under my shoe clad feet. Great write. Yours in poetry,
gypsy
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A very nice Haiku
It catches the sound as Autumn arrives the crackling leaves as they drop. I like it very much.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
ED.
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