rut of of hour
is colored by climate
light switch is down
bird's chirp is flicked
as though in dark cloud of tree
and my deep breath is heard desperate
rather than in bright day of health as with newborn
sublime water through snow boundary
reads dearer than pine with it still
not hungry until noise of spring
bend depend
bowl without a kettle
nothing vast as stove but garden
and forward fermentation
dilegence to neglect growth of place for lapse
personal ripple
fixed between two cold fields
of what facility I lacked with my hearth's ease
and a face unimaginable in break from modern warmth
that can't get shiver down spine to useful nerve
swerved from lotion like skin lots home heart soaked green
beans by been
leukoreah only crawling on me
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countenace tunnel
effort forward stairs as quarter jukebox
suddenly sing seeing bare branches
as shadow in sky a mirage for climb
like miscarriage isn't tangible after view date
except by sas of season with because
that becomes totally beautiful
Author notes
http://www.rosselli.com/images/TKinkade2.jpg
Thomas Kinkade
A contest entry
- Kinkade Inspired. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
ain't hyper by good luck, unnatural emoticons NOR applause symbols...
Comments
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Thank you for your creatively beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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I like this great take on the prompt such beauty behind the words
Best of luck in the contest
Georgia xx
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X- Queen - Georgia - X I'm sorry for my delight's delay
I did have strong feelings with that picture emerge, so I was glad you found a match in my write to see worth through the two.
I do go for atmospheric descriptions, as I even ask to communciate in comments without made up icons...
I aim for a return favor sooner than this eventual reply ~
you could call me Carolyn
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