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Nursery Style Interrogation.

 

 

Slam a fist upon the table,
yell as hard as you are able.

Interrogate me? Oh such a cliche.
Yes it was me, but I'll never say.

Humpty Dumpty did sit on that wall,
and a fake suicide note I did scrawl.

 

 

 

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Prompt is: Humpty Dumpty Was Pushed
30 to 40 words.

By November-Dani

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 31, 2008
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    Loads of fun, thanks for your entry lol


  • chilali
    October 11, 2008

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    Hahahaha! I loved this piece! Very smart! Nicely penned!! Congratulations on the Goldd! Well deserved and good luck in the other contest


  • Andi. gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    this is so darn cute
    good turn on that old fabled story of Humpty Dumpty.
    and what was an egg doing sitting on top of a wall anyway?
    best of luck dani
    ♥ Dani


  • arnica karuna
    October 9, 2008

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    Hahahaha.. loved it!!! while I laugh my head off, thanks for sharing and giving me a light moment in this long and tiring day. thanks again!


  • Maxboy gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    You murdered Humpty Dumpty?

    Very good, good luck in the contest.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    LOL!!! This is wonderful...great flow and take on the prompt...very creative...thank you for entering and the laughter...
    mystic


  • Hannie
    October 7, 2008

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    awesome poem dani....i need not say anymore for u no its good to!! lol (did that make any sense to you at all...)

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