A castle beneath the starlit sky
Shining with the fullmoon beams,
Flakes of snow keep falling by..
Distant trites from the reindeer's bell
And Santa's laughter piercing high,
From the castle's top we hear them well..
Slow, but clear, we hear them well
And the scent of citrus fill the air
In the cellars there, the fairies dwell.
A castle built by the Winter's hand
Beyond the hills, in the beguiling Square
The castle stands on the frozen land..
Author notes
For u Kiarna..
A contest entry
- Castles in the snow. by PoetryPuppy.
425 points, ended October 13, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the poem. I was able to images in my head
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100th hoodwink
Wow this picture is amazing. It looks like a winter wonderland or it looks like the castle from Chronicles of Narnia in the movie. Congrats on your gold trophy.
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Holy freakin' crap. I totaly saw what you where trying to describe. It feels like I've been here before. Oh well. Awesome poem.
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Congratulations on the gold! The clear, sparkling air is full of magic!
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this poem is simply MAGICAL!!
i love it, there is an enchanted quality to it
i loved the personification
"A castle built by the Winter's hand" it is such a beautiful image!!
I wish to see a white Christmas one day
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that poem is sparkely
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wow...what a lovely description of a 'castle' filled with snow...it makes me want to go there and experience what life is in that castle...such a fantastic piece! goodluck!
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Instead of Santa's laughter piercing high, you should doing something more jolly. Santa's a nice jolly old guy. Hobey Ho! Good luck!
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Thank you for your beautiful poem, love Kiarna
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I loved the whole fairy tale feel to this poem. Very nicely penned.
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