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Is This Me?

.She Looks Into The Mirror.

Staring back at her
Is someone
she doesn't recognise

Staring back at her
Is a girl
Who isn't happy

Staring back at her
Is a face
She doesn't like

Staring back at her
Are eyes
That have lost their life

Staring back at her
Is a body
Which she hates

Staring back at her
Is a hairstyle
That she hated 2 years back

She looks into the mirror
And sees all the little changes
She sees someone
Completely different to what everyone else sees

She looks into the mirror
And staring back at her
Is me.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 16, 2008

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    Honey... if you don't like who you've become.. be someone you like
    In the end, you have to live with you

    xo


  • my imaginary friend
    October 13, 2008

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    oh wow! this is exceptional! Very well written I feel as if i am looking at you through the mirror as well. Theren are a lot of emotion in this excellent work