Summer
Campers are in bed,
and as I read by lantern,
crickets sing for me.
Winter
Prints of a rabbit
mar the field they cross, and yet
beauty is enhanced.
A contest entry
- Seasonal " Haiku's" by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended October 16, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
I just love nature and its many wonders and you have captured so beautifully two beautiful things one can experience in nature, simple yet beautiful!!!!!
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so simple, so sweet, and yet, so telling. lovely write!
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Both hiaku's are realy good I like them just like they are, but I must confess the WINTER is my favorite.
Thank you for your entries and good luck in the contest.
ED.
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