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signed & sealed

 

She bled ink on tainted pages.

Hurt produced syllables of grievances,

and they took years to explain.

 

This diary is forever sealed,

   to open it would be devastating.

 

 

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    creative choice, a midnight meeting between your central character and a diary that they do not dare to read for fear of the memories it could unleash.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    WOW

    Amazing work! I love how in five lines you laid the pain down so intensely...great write. I love it! Yours in poetry, gypsy


  • trekkergirl
    October 7, 2008
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    ohhhh wow deep.