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Tonight-Lets-Play

You beckon me
with come hither eyes

I know this is so wrong
but feels so right

and baby don't stop
let's play our games

Tonight

cause tomorrow we

Forget

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  • MD Masroor
    November 6, 2008

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    Wow. A trophy well deserved. Your take on the prompt was amazing. The flow and the structure itself was good. Well penned! Keep it up!


  • myrataal silver member
    November 5, 2008

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    A sad song of life ...

    often wasted on the moment.

    Very well expressed.

    Thank you so much for reading my work, I appreciate it.

    Myra


  • sheltered
    October 8, 2008
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    forget about what?


  • trekkergirl
    October 7, 2008
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    wow this is soooo good. and right on the prompt. Great job

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