You beckon me
with come hither eyes
I know this is so wrong
but feels so right
and baby don't stop
let's play our games
Tonight
cause tomorrow we
Forget
Author notes
10 poets....
30 words.....
Your Prompt??
INDISCRETION
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest..... by jcat.
600 points, ended October 13, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. A trophy well deserved. Your take on the prompt was amazing. The flow and the structure itself was good. Well penned! Keep it up!


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A sad song of life ...
often wasted on the moment.
Very well expressed.
Thank you so much for reading my work, I appreciate it.
Myra


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forget about what?


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everything that happened the night before
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shhhh
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wow this is soooo good. and right on the prompt. Great job

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